I now realize how important it is to make writing a daily part of work in the classroom. Many of the students in my fifth grade dyad placement were struggling the other day, when asked to write an “I Am From” poem. The poem was scripted, each line containing a prompt, yet the students still had difficulty. Many almost seemed afraid to write, in fear of “getting it wrong”. Several of them approached me, individually for assistance. Generally, I helped the students by asking them a series of questions. If the line said, “I am from (name something you like to do)” I’d start by asking, “Do you play any sports? Do you like to dance? Do you like to bake? Ride bikes? etc.” Sometimes it took awhile, but I was eventually able to find a question that “sparked” the students into action (writing). This made me realize how important it would have been to “brainstorm” with them before sending them "off on their own". It would have been helpful if I had gone through the poem instructions, line by line, and had the students “brainstorm” together. This, I believe, would have made the assignment much easier. I could have, for example, asked a series of questions (the prompts in the poem) to help them come up with ideas. I know, from personal experience that I also write much better after doing this.
I also realized the importance of “showing” students rather than merely “telling” them how to do an assignment. I believe the fifth graders in my dyad would have benefited greatly if I had shown them an “I AM From” poem that I had written myself. But, Regie Routman actually takes this idea of modeling one step further. She writes in her book, Writing Essentials, page 47, “Many teachers do their demonstration writing behind the scenes. They want to do their modeled writing ahead of time, to be prepared. Then, they show students the finished writing as part of their demonstration. This robs students of the opportunity to see real-life writing in process and diminishes the learning possibilities.” She makes the point that students need to see the work being modeled. They need to see the process of writing an assignment on demand, within a set time frame. Both of these strategies, brainstorming and “real time” modeling would have, I believe, helped these fifth graders write their poems.